Words and Phrases to avoid in academic writing

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Updates 2024/01/11

I decide to collate a list of words and phrases that should be avoided in academic writing and promise that I will keep updating this list. On one hand, it is a reminder for myself that you should keep improving your academic writing. On the other hand, I would like to share this list with you, especially fresh PhD students.

First of all, academic writing in English is very different from oral English/informal writing/website posts.

The principle is - you should try to avoid expressions that are too informal, unsophisticated, vague, exaggerated, or subjective. Also, keep your writing accurate and concise, so please avoid those that are generally unnecessary or incorrect.

Too informal

The following words and phrases are considered too informal for a dissertation or academic paper.

TabooExampleAlternative
A bitThe interviews were a bit difficult to scheduleThe interviews were (difficult/somewhat difficult) to schedule
A lot of, a couple ofA lot of studies(Many/several/a great number of/eight) studies
Isn’t, can’t, doesn’t, would’ve (or any other contraction)The sample isn’tThe sample is not
Kind of, sort ofThe findings were kind of significantThe findings were (somewhat significant/significant to some degree)
Til, tillFrom 2008 till 2012From 2008 (until/to) 2012
You, your (i.e., the second-person point of view)You can clearly see the resultsOne can clearly see the results; The results can clearly be seen

Informal sentence starts are too informal in academic writing, as follows:

TabooExampleAlternative
PlusPlus, the participants were in agreement on the third question(Moreover/Furthermore/What is more), the participants were in agreement on the third question
SoSo, it can be concluded that the model needs further refinementTherefore, it can be concluded that the model needs further refinement
AndAnd the participants were all over the age of 30The participants were all over the age of 30
BesidesBesides, we asked all the participants to sign an agreementAdditionally, we asked all the participants to sign an agreement

Too vague

Using vague terms makes your writing imprecise and may cause people to interpret it in different ways. Always try to be as specific as possible.

TabooExampleAlternative
StuffPeople are concerned about their stuffPeople are concerned about their (belongings/possessions/personal effects)
ThingThe report presents many thingsThe report presents many (details/findings/recommendations)
A whileThis topic has interested researchers for a whileThis topic has interested researchers for more than 30 years
SomeSome people argue that…[Strive for specificity] Several studies/a large number of studies …

Too exaggerated

Academic writing is usually unadorned and direct. Some adverbs of frequency (such as always and never) and intensifiers (words that create emphasis, such as really) are often too dramatic. Some terms are not accurate – you’re making a significant claim when you say something is perfect or never happens.

These terms do sometimes add value, but try to use them sparingly.

TabooExampleAlternative
Always, neverResearchers always argue thatResearchers (frequently/commonly/ typically) argue that
PerfectThe perfect solution to the problem(An ideal solution/one of the best solutions) to the problem
Really, so, superThis theory is really importantThis theory is (important/critical/crucial)

Too subjective

Some words and phrases reveal your own bias. For instance, if you state that something will obviously happen, you are indicating that you think the occurrence is obvious – not stating a fact.

In most cases, take care when using words and phrases such as those below – try to let the facts speak for themselves, or emphasize your point with less biased language.

TabooExampleAlternative
Beautiful, ugly, wonderful, horrible, great, boring, daunting, overwhelmingA review of the literature yielded many great articlesA review of the literature yielded many relevant articles
Obviously, naturally, of courseThe results obviously indicateThe results clearly indicate

Generally incorrect

Certain words and phrases are often used incorrectly, even by native speakers of a language.

It’s important that you don’t let them creep into your writing - just avoid them in writing.

You should also bear in mind that some of these mistakes relate to things we all frequently mishear (for instance, we often think the speaker is saying would of instead of would have).

TabooExampleAlternative
LiterallyThe students literally did not understandThe students did not understand
Would of, had ofThe study would of consideredThe study would have considered

Others

In general, you should also try to avoid using words and phrases that fall into the following categories:

  • Jargon (i.e., “insider” terminology that may be difficult for readers from other fields to understand)
  • Clichés (i.e., expressions that are heavily overused, such as think outside of the box and at the end of the day)
  • Everyday abbreviations (e.g., approx., ASAP, corona, stats, info)
  • Slang (e.g., cops, cool)
  • Gender-biased language (e.g., firemen, mankind)
  • Generally unnecessary (e.g., redundant expressions that do not add meaning, such as compete with each other instead of simply compete)

Reference

  • Vinz, S. (2023, September 11). Words and Phrases to Avoid in Academic Writing. Scribbr. Retrieved January 9, 2024, from https://www.scribbr.com/academic-writing/taboo-words/ (My article relies heavily dependent on this reference)

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